Sleeping Valor

DoaV's Makeover! Yes, that's right. Be afraid. Or not. When I first posted the prologue and chapter one, I was showered in praise. Sure, there were a bunch of grammar ...

=P Not rhyme, rhythm. The beat. =P In my head it follows a beat, almost like a song. So I notice when one of the lines doesn't fit into the ...

I know. My fingers tell me so. >_>

Not sure if this should have capitals at the beginning of new lines, so I won't say it should. Your last line "This is how much I love you so" ...

The emotion is so deep, I start to breathe more heavily, It takes forever to slow down After I've started getting angry. This is the only stanza (methinks that's the ...

=P The loveliness has been lessened by the fact my digits are cold from trying to take a picture for my mom. =P

I can see it! :D

You could, but if it's kind of long and not really related (in the sense that it's a new scene separate from this one) then a new thread will do. ...

Flashbacks! XD I wrote a whole story about a character who can only remember things through flasbacks. I think her name was Zeela. ^_^ No plot, of course. btw. Is ...

*bows* Thanks for reading. It's been fun. ^_^ Keek out!

A very cool dude, possibly in a sci-fi world, who works alone and has a mission. =P Sleeping Valor

=P Keek's not my real name. I don't know how it started. One of my friend's started calling me Kiki, and then another (more mature) friend started calling me Keek. ...

Harry Potter aside, it makes me think of a rather average guy. Might be a name I'd use for a soldier, though. sevendawns

^_^ Read prologue, commented. It looks lovely. Oh! If you need help with characterization I'd be happy to give you some tips if I can. Characters are the most important ...

Yuppers. It's short. But very beautiful. ^_^ I have no help for you, except to say that though this style is lovely, don't write the whole story like this. I ...